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January 30, 2021 at 10:05 pm
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Now, in the new manuscripts I’m writing (several short stories), I am very aware of when I use nodded, smiled, and gasped. If I am too intend to getting what’s in my mind into a document, I highlight the instances and make a note to replace them with something else that shows what the character is thinking or feeling.