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February 4, 2021 at 3:06 pm
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Obviously, not all of my suggestions will work. Full disclosure, I didn’t go through and proofread my comments/edits before posting this time, but I did read the whole chapter (as a reader) a few days before starting the critique and thought it was quite good. I hope my “over-choreographed” comment didn’t offend. I re-read it after I posted and thought, “Oh dear.”