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February 11, 2021 at 9:47 am
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Thanks, Ana. I’ve had the same thoughts about Milly and Mark needing more interactions, but figuring out ways for them to come together has been a challenge. I had intended to write a scene in this chapter of a reception after her speech, but decided for the rendezvous at the fitness center instead.
Is it okay to bring in a third POV in a romance? I’ve been wondering if I need something from Tim’s POV.