Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions February 12, 2021 at 12:21 am #47271 Lisa CoyParticipant Really good, Zara. I like how you formatted it. I made a few comments, but I don’t know the rules for non-fiction–or fiction, for that matter–so use what you can and ignore the rest. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.