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February 18, 2021 at 9:57 pm
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Hi Lisa,
Catching up. Here is CH 20. Use what helps. I noticed some “animated body parts” – mouths, pinky.
Here is a great blog post about how to fix these. https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/mistakes-24/
Zara
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