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Zara West
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Hi Lisa,

Catching up. Here is CH 20. Use what helps.  I noticed some “animated body parts” – mouths, pinky.

Here is a great blog post about how to fix these. https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/mistakes-24/

Zara

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