Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions February 19, 2021 at 2:42 pm #47365 Victoria ElliotParticipant Hi Zara, Lots of good information. I made a few comments. I hope it helps. Also, I didn’t click on every link, but that is certainly something to check (as I’m sure you know). Vicki Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.