Hi! I’m new to FTH — just joined a week or two ago. I’m working on a final push to make my first novel, Diving In, query-ready. I’ve been learning how to write romance on it, draft after draft, and it’s ALMOST there — but I need to shift things around at the beginning. Once they get going, people are engaged and enjoy the book, but the pulling-them-in bit is giving me trouble. Taking a workshop this month on starting the novel in the right place.