Reply To: Emily Marsh submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Emily Marsh submissions › Reply To: Emily Marsh submissions April 24, 2021 at 6:25 pm #48155 Ana MorganParticipant I made lots of suggestions, Emily. Take what works and ignore the rest. I think you can cut out some dialogue tags. Story problem is well presented: Lise is in a relationship she’s questioning. Great job! Ana Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.