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April 24, 2021 at 6:25 pm #58922

QueenofForestCats

Keymaster

I made lots of suggestions, Emily. Take what works and ignore the rest. I think you can cut out some dialogue tags.

Story problem is well presented: Lise is in a relationship she’s questioning. Great job!

Ana

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