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Emily Marsh
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I made lots of suggestions, Emily. Take what works and ignore the rest. I think you can cut out some dialogue tags.

Story problem is well presented: Lise is in a relationship she’s questioning. Great job!

Ana

 

Thanks so much for the feedback! Looking over your comments, and you’re right — I really do have a lot of dialogue tags!

*Gets out eraser.*

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