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Emily Marsh
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Hey Emily,

Good first chapter. I agree with Ana that you went overboard with dialogue tags.

I made a lot of suggestions for tightening your prose. I really like your descriptions and think you can sprinkle in some more.

Good luck with it.

 

 

Many thanks! Always looking to tighten that prose. I appreciate the suggestions.

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