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Emily Marsh
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Hi Emily,

Your writing is really clean, and I enjoyed the back and forth between Lise and Eileen, but I also think the problem/conflict needs to appear earlier in the chapter. I’ve left several comments.

Good luck.

Vicki

Great! Thanks so much for your feedback!

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