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Emily Marsh
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Well I finally managed to finish this chapter. To refresh your memory, Chapter 12 ended with Milly and Mark bumping into each other in the hotel Fitness Center. They were both trying to work up the courage to admit their feelings for each other when someone else came into the room. Afraid to open herself up, Milly bolted outside and ran up the steps before Mark could react and they didn’t finish the conversation.

As always, looking for anything.

 

Hi! I’d be glad to comment, but I haven’t been following the book. Do you have a brief summary of the plot available?

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