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Victoria Elliot
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Hi Todd,

I didn’t have a ton of corrections for this chapter. Your writing is solid. I’ve recently started focusing a lot more on my character and scene goals, and I think that’s something you could benefit from as well. I definitely think it helps with pacing and keeping readers engaged.

Vicki

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