Reply To: Todd McGee submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Todd McGee submissions › Reply To: Todd McGee submissions June 9, 2021 at 9:06 pm #48603 Emily MarshParticipant Hi! This is way later than I meant it to be — hope it’s still useful and that the comments help. Overall, it’s a really good chapter. I am excited to see what happens next! This reply was modified 3 days, 13 hours ago by Emily Marsh.