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Todd McGee
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Emily,

Here are my thoughts. I think this needs to be punched up quite a bit. Queries are hard, so don’t get discouraged.

Are you from Cary, N.C.? That’s where I live. I think I may have even been in one of your writer’s group meetings before.

Good luck with it.

Todd

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