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Victoria Elliot
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Hi Emily,

Here are my comments on your synopsis. Overall, I think you need to use more active language. I gave some examples of how I might do it (doesn’t mean it’s right). I also noted something I thought was missing plot-wise. I hope it helps.

Good luck with your queries.

Vicki

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