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Zara West
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Hi Lisa,

Attached is my overly detailed review of the revised chapter. I agree the ending needs to change. It is not a hook. You need to end with a dilemma. I give some suggestions. If you rewrite, I will gladly look at it again. Again use what is helpful and ignore all the rest of my chattering.

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