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Lisa Coy
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Hi Todd, Thanks for helping me to decide where to cut. Instead of creating urgency at the beginning, I ended up constipating it. I need to add more tension earlier on and sprinkle in the backstory in chapter 2, if at all. I appreciate you taking time away from the fifty stories you’re reading for Writer’s Digest. I attended their virtual conference last year. It was very organized and enlightening.

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