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Kathy Crouch
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Thanks Ana,

I didn’t get specific about where his family was being held. I hadn’t thought of that aspect. I have a limit of 30 pages for the contest. Which is better than X words in some ways.  I appreciate your suggestions. I’m fixing them as I read your critique.

I will run Chapter 2 through tomorrow.

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