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Laura Russell
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Homework #1 I followed the bullet points.

Theresia Camara sat cross-legged on her bedroom floor surrounded by clothes. Someone else’s clothes. Two huge garbage bags full, to be exact.

First three lines from M&B August medical romance by Tina Beckett.

First thing: not clear what significance these clothes may have so I have my first question.

3rd person, likely deep in stretches

Past tense, since this is what I am accustomed to reading and writing, I am thinking hard if present tense would feel more immediate or engrossing.

Deepen with a visceral response to the clothing. Next sentences contrast these designer labels with her own new dress and says she ‘felt sick.’

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