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Victoria Elliot
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Thank you for the feedback, Todd. Your comments about the opening are interesting. What is now Chapter 2 was my original chapter 1. This chapter was something I added to make sure to hit on some of the suspense details early on, and frankly, I wasn’t sure it worked. I’ll take a look at your suggestions. 😀

Vicki

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