CP Rider, is it weird I want to cry happy tears reading this?
I am SO happy to hear this!! I love breakthroughs.
Betty’s guilt-flaw is *chef’s kiss*. It’s rooted in her past, it’s clear it influences her decisions and actions, and it has significantly taken a toll on her life. YESS.
Also, ooo, I love Herman’s flaws and motive. They directly lead to those stakes. Great work. I feel like you really know the soul of your characters and that’s going to be really powerful as you write their POVs.
Katie McCoach, Instructor
Grow your best story!