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Zara West
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Hi Todd,

Attached is feedback on your Chapter 1. I have been very detailed as I know this is an older work and in need of revision to get it to read fresh and fit the romance genre and conventions. But as always, use what is helpful and ignore the rest. if it doesn’t fit your goals.

Zara

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