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CPRider
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It was a fun assignment. Thanks for allowing me to stretch outside what I normally write! 🙂

Cheryl

Cheryl,

SO glad you got into this! Damn, love the emotion in this! You really captured a deep connection to Angel and his mentality. What drives him and what gets in his way. And I love how you used one word (hollow) to expand upon. Great work!

 

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