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Todd McGee
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Hey Zara,

I have been working on turning this into a script and have entered a couple of competitions to get feedback, and one consistent theme is that Michael needs more of an arc. So I’m working to change his characterization to make him more career-driven and to view his small-town life as something he wants to keep in his past, which is exactly the points you are making.

Thanks for reading.

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