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Victoria Elliot

Here you go, Zara. My primary suggestion is to bold the portion of your examples that you are referencing. My concern is when you mention phrases or clauses, participles or prepositions, that many readers won’t know what you mean and therefore won’t know what to look for in the example.

I hope this helps.



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