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Victoria Elliot
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Here’s my newest attempt. I’m not sure about the last part (why he can’t). The siblings’ mother has been in hiding for the entire series so far, and I know I need to resolve that part of the story. I’m just not sure if her being there would truly prevent him from being able to go after the gangster. If anything, it might harden his resolve.

Jack Hughes wants to go after the gangster Rocco Alario because he’s tired of the constant threat to his family but he can’t because his mother has unexpectedly comes out of hiding.

Another option, which would go more along with what I’d originally intended for Jack’s story:

Jack Hughes wants to go after the gangster Rocco Alario because he’s tired of the constant threat to his family but he can’t because he is arrested for a crime he didn’t commit. 

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