Thank you Ana and Vicki for the great feedback on Ch 6 and all my Chapters. I fixed everything you pointed out.
I know it wasn’t exciting as reading a romance novel, but I am now back to writing a new bio-historical, Monumental. This one is much happier than my last two. I only just started, but should have a draft by the end of November if not sooner.
One thing I will say, is that writing those four writing guides has helped me write better.
Thank you again,