September 21, 2021 at 4:17 pm #49694
Oooo, that adds another layer of conflict for the heroine! That seems like it would fit in nicely to the story. It could be the black moment if that’s her lowest point, but keep the door open to other possibilities too. Maybe the hero has a bigger secret he’s hiding. Maybe there’s something behind why he acquired the debts in the first place he wouldn’t want her to find out.
This is intriguing. I’ll have to see what I can come up with for the hero’s secret.