Thanks, for the tips. I appreciate it. It sounded cruel to my ears for the detective to come to see her in the ER where they transported her after her husband was killed. (She went into shock when she ran to the entrance to the store and saw her husband lying there in a pool of blood.)
Anyway here’s what I wrote that it flagged was gone.:
“I’m sorry. I know it doesn’t ease the pain. But he was gone before you could get to him.”
Opening her eyes, she studied the man standing at the foot of her bed.
Probably six foot two or three with dark blue-green eyes combined with dark brown hair. He seemed to appear from nowhere. Who was he?