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peter.andrews
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Hi, Jeanne
#1 promises a fun “meet cute.” People do get proprietary about their spaces! If she’s fussy and he’s not, there’s already a contrast.
#2 I love this second one because it turns on a surprise and moves to a situation where true character triumphs over external appearances.
#3 echoes the metamorphoses in Greek literature while feeling solidly American. And it already has vivid details.

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