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Joanna Jelen
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Re: Jeanne’s story about the owl/girl in the barn (sorry, I couldn’t find the title)

I don’t know enough about the flash fiction to comment about your story’s structure and elements, but let me comment on the emotions the story evoked in me. Wow! The story grabbed me, sucked me in, and took for a ride. The last paragraph was so powerful, I’m still pinning for Charley.

Great job! 🙂

Joanna

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