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peter.andrews
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Hi, Joanna

Catch-22 is a great choice. It hooks with surprise and humor all the way through. The voice is amazing.

What I like about your Schitt’s Creek intro is it gets twisty right away. It’s his fault, but the manage is blamed right away. You could take it a step further with more specificity “what happened” does create a question, but a hint of what happened would be more intriguing. Trust does something similar, but betrayal is stronger and, again, there might be an opportunity to be more specific without revealing too much.

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