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peter.andrews
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Hi, Silvia

I like your third premise best. A bit more about the little girl could really enhance it. The second premise could apply to many stories that are already written so it might be worth developing it so it’s distinctive. The first one already has a conflict implied. It needs another interest point, a reason for potential readers to care, and I suspect a little digging will find it. Almost there.

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