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peter.andrews
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This is a wonderful opening, Ruchama (going a bit past the hook). As testimony to HOW wonderful this opening, check out how much it included as the hook for Hitchcock’s film. I’m intrigued about the earlier draft. If you want to take the time to note how it was improved, that would be great.

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