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peter.andrews
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Hi, Shari

The element that impresses me the most is how tactile this becomes at the end. A lot of writers stay in their heads to much. It’s delightful to be brought into this scene so physically. I’d love to turn to the next page.

Also, thanks for keeping the bagels in place. It’s amusing, but also provides a great example of barrelling ahead even when words are missing.

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