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Ruchama
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Shari: Thanks for your comments. Yes, I’m still having trouble adding emotion. Maybe because I identified so much with the character. My own response to crises, or emotion evoking events is to become increasingly logical.  And so that’s what she seems to have done.  The need to stop thinking and just rest comes with exhaustion.  I’m familiar with that, but I can see that I need to add the exhaustion factor before the rest.

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