Thanks for taking a look, Connie. I appreciate the feedback.
I noticed you posted Ch. 2 of your WIP. Are you still looking for feedback on Ch. 1? I started working on it last week, but got sidetracked by the fires in CO–we live less than 10 miles away. Anyway, let me know if you’d like me to continue with Ch. 1 or just move on to Ch. 2.