Thanks for taking the class a second time. I’m humbled that you liked it enough the first time to come back. One of the things I liken a sex scene to is a fight scene–there’s a lot of physical action that’s driven by emotion. And then, the after-effects can change the trajectory of story.
I’m impressed that you not only swam D-I (my eldest daughter swam D-III, but only for a year bc it was a HUGE commitment) but that you bike race. Good for you!