Reply To: Lesson 3 and moving forward

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Doreen JensenDoreen Jensen
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    This is my urban fantasy–
    The main character is a Scottish selkie from Orkney, turned bodyguard who has been searching for his lost mate for many years
    What changed–his love disappeared on the eve of their wedding and he desperately needs to know where she is and why. was she taken, is she alive, did she choose to abandon him.
    He still loves her and he needs to know if she chose to leave him
    This changes when he finds out she and her new husband are his latest clients–and she has a new identity and doesn’t know she is a selkie–so his goal becomes to convince her of her real identity. and emerge from the amnesia to circle back to why did she leave. In the meantime, he has to protect them both(from a hitman)
    Is it too confusing?

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