That’s super intriguing. It sounds like you have a great setup! Both characters are strong and your m/c has lots about her to like, admire, and sympathize with.
goal statement for your sex scene:
Certain she’s inherited the genes for schizophrenia, reclusive Ammi Folkright is losing the fight to free her father from prison. When new Physician Assistant Galen Thomas saves her father’s life, she hopes she’s finally found a champion. Galen works hard to gain her trust and, in the process, awakens her dormant sexuality. Frightened by her feelings, using a mistake he made as justification, she pushes him away—and yet he keeps coming around. Gradually, she lets down her guard. And then one night….