Thanks for submitting. I want to be able to focus on what you’ve shared so give me a day or two to read and comment. I’m excited to get started. Also, is it okay if I post my comments to the group? Or would you rather that I send them only to you?
Here’s my sex scene. I hope I’ve tried to struck an enticing balance between action, emotion, dialogue, description and exposition.
Hopefully it’s not too tab a in slot b.