I read through the script and realized I am not qualified to critique its format or structure. It’s a good story and the dialogue seems snappy. I can offer some suggestions on the logline. You have this one I think:
When a missing European Prince turns up in a small Maine town suffering from amnesia, his ex-girlfriend, a struggling actress seeking publicity, rushes to his side and engineers a media frenzy while an earnest nurse works to help him regain his MEMORY.
I would get rid of some of the -ing words to make it pop more. I also feel that the nurse is getting short-shrift. This is a romance -it’s not just his memory that is sparked.
Hospitalized for amnesia in rural Maine, a missing European prince becomes the center of controversy when his ex-girlfriend, a struggling actress, rushes to his side and engineers a media frenzy, only to be rescued by the caring nurse who sparks his memory and his heart