On to Chapter 5. Sorry this is long. I am looking to cut this down by at least 500 words. Any help would be appreciated.
Ana – I forgot to thank you for your feedback on how I handled the Native American romance element. Lots of controversial things in this woman’s life. I am beginning to think I’d do better making up fictional characters. I actually tried to change this to a fictional woman, but couldn’t come up with a statute for her to make that would be as great as Vinnie Ream’s Lincoln.