One thing I do when I’m looking to cut is color code my work. I put the dialogue in one color and all the times I’m in the POV character’s head in another (either describing what she sees/hears/feels, etc., or what she’s thinking) in another. That leaves all the descriptions of character movements unshaded. I read each color by itself first to see how the story progresses just through dialogue or internal thoughts. Then I see if one color is dominant over the others and figure out if that’s where I want to cut.
For your chapter, I see a lot of internal thoughts, so I might think about whether or not that’s where I’d cut.