Love that last idea.
I started down another track last night. The nurse is the main character, but I’m not really focusing on her.
Unaware her patient with amnesia might be a missing European Prince, a devoted nurse helps him regain his memory. When the prince’s ex-girlfriend, a struggling actor looking for a career boost, sees an online article about the unidentified man, she rushes to his side and engineers a media frenzy that engulfs the town with Royal fever and embroils the nurse in an international firestorm.
Hi Todd, Just got back from a few weeks of vacation in Cali and jumped online to see what’s been happening in critique. Quite a lot it seems. I like the latest version of the loglines because I had a similar question when I read the first four – who is the heroine? I think your newer version puts the nurse in the spotlight and the actress more of a bump in the road. Great work!
What are your plans with the script? After spending some time in L.A., I’ve become more fascinated and interested with scriptwriting. I guess Hollywood can have that affect on you.
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