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Great job, Jill.
Write-ins and writing retreats are always inspiring. I did 2629. Much better than I expected as spent as much time researching as writing. Now time to close down and write. Zara
Got off to a slow start. Had 1213 words. I realized that I really ought to done more research before starting, but my October was terribly hectic, so I think it will be slow going for me for awhile. But I have a great outline and all words count toward reaching the end. I will get there. Cheers to everyone’s Day 1 accomplishments. Zara
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Happy Writing, Everyone!
Been trying to attached CH 83 for several days. I keep getting an ERROR This type of file not allowed. I tried docx, rtf, and pdf. Is anyone else having a problem? Zara
Hi I’m Zara West. My email is email@example.com. My NaNo handle is zarawestsuspense
Here is chapter 20 of Hooked. All feedback deeply appreciated. Zara
I love how you handled Maci’s school day. Not sure about them eating in the school library. Usually a big no no. Use what is helpful. Zara
I think the feelings flow well through this scene. You may want to add some tension to the ending hook. Use what is helpful. Zara
Hi Jenn, Here are some thoughts for CH 79-82. Zara
Thanks, Ana. Always appreciate your feedback. Zara
Ana, Here is a possible new ending for Ch 19. Thoughts?
He traced his finger over her signature: Cat. She would always be his Cat.
But he wasn’t going to be her Alex.
Not unless he did something drastic. He turned and stared out toward the harbor. Like get that water sample for her. A chill breeze wafted around him. And everyone in Southwind Harbor knew that was impossible.
Good point about the end. I will rethink that. He does go to NYC in the next chapter. Zara
Thanks , Jenn. Very helpful comments, as always. Zara
Here is CH 19 of Hooked. All thoughts and comments appreciated. Zara
Here is my feedback on CH 5 and 6. Use what is helpful. Zara
Here is my feedback on 24, use what is helpful. Zara
Some thoughts for you to consider on CH 5-6. Use what is helpful. Zara
Thank you, Carla, for the fast feedback. Much appreciated. Zara
Here is Chapter 18 of Hooked. Getting to the end. All comments appreciated.Zara
Hi Carla, Here are some thoughts for chapter 4. Zara
So sorry, Jenn. Here is the correct copy and the rtf. My only excuse is being in a time crunch. Zara
Here is some feedback on Ch 3. Not much. Reads well. Zara
Jenn, here are 70-74 too.
Here are some suggestions, Jenn. Use what is useful. Love how the story is going. Zara
Thank you Ana and Jenn for the feedback on Chapter 17. I am buried right now in another drafting another book so forgive my delay in responding. Your prompt crits are always deeply appreciated. Zara
Oops. Sorry about that. Not sure how I did that. Anyway for those who don’t want to wade, here is Ch 17 all by itself.
Here is my next chapter. This is the REAL Ch 17. The chapter I submitted last week was actually Chapter 16. All comments welcome. Zara