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  • in reply to: Day 2 – Jill #35710
    Zara West
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    Great job, Jill.

    Write-ins and writing retreats are always inspiring. I did 2629. Much better than I expected as spent as much time researching as writing. Now time to close down and write. Zara

    in reply to: Day 1 totals #35709
    Zara West
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    Got off to a slow start. Had 1213 words. I realized that I really ought to done more research before starting, but my October was terribly hectic, so I think it will be slow going for me for awhile. But I have a great outline and all words count toward reaching the end. I will get there. Cheers to everyone’s Day 1 accomplishments. Zara

    in reply to: Updated List #35708
    Zara West
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    I see that my email is missing. My email is zarawestbooks@gmail.com My NaNo handle is zarawestsuspense

    Happy Writing, Everyone!

    in reply to: Jenn Fox Submissions #35662
    Zara West
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    Hi Jenn,

    Been trying to attached CH 83 for several days. I keep getting an ERROR This type of file not allowed. I tried docx, rtf, and pdf. Is anyone else having a problem? Zara

    in reply to: Join the Racing Hearts NANO Team #35650
    Zara West
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    Hi I’m Zara West. My email is zarawestbooks@gmail.com. My NaNo handle is zarawestsuspense

    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35592
    Zara West
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    Here is chapter 20 of Hooked. All feedback deeply appreciated. Zara

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    in reply to: Jenn Fox Submissions #35591
    Zara West
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    I love how you handled Maci’s school day. Not sure about them eating in the school library. Usually a big no no. Use what is helpful.  Zara

    in reply to: Lisa Coughlin Chapter 7 #35498
    Zara West
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    Hi Lisa,

     

    I think the feelings flow well through this scene. You may want to add some tension to the ending hook.  Use what is helpful. Zara

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    in reply to: Jenn Fox Submissions #35486
    Zara West
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    Hi Jenn, Here are some thoughts for CH 79-82. Zara

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    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35485
    Zara West
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    Thanks, Ana. Always appreciate your feedback. Zara

    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35480
    Zara West
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    Ana, Here is a possible new ending for Ch 19. Thoughts?

     

    He traced his finger over her signature: Cat. She would always be his Cat.

    But he wasn’t going to be her Alex.

    Not unless he did something drastic. He turned and stared out toward the harbor. Like get that water sample for her. A chill breeze wafted around him. And everyone in Southwind Harbor knew that was impossible.

    in reply to: Who wants to do NaNoWriMo? #35472
    Zara West
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    I’m in. This will be my sixth year. Zara

    https://www.nanowrimo.org/

    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35262
    Zara West
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    Thank Ana,

     

    Good point about the end. I will rethink that. He does go to NYC in the next chapter. Zara

    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35255
    Zara West
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    Thanks , Jenn. Very helpful comments, as always.  Zara

    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35247
    Zara West
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    Sorry about that. Here it goes again. CH 19! Sub Zara Chapter 19.docx is the correct one.  Zara

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    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35241
    Zara West
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    Here is CH 19 of Hooked. All thoughts and comments appreciated.  Zara

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    in reply to: Carla Ward submissions #35235
    Zara West
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    Morning, Carla,

     

    Here is my feedback on CH 5 and 6. Use what is helpful.  Zara

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    in reply to: Ana Morgan submissions #35230
    Zara West
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    Hi Ana,

     

    Here is my feedback on 24, use what is helpful.  Zara

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    in reply to: Lisa Coughlin Chapter 5&6 #35129
    Zara West
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    Some thoughts for you to consider on CH 5-6. Use what is helpful. Zara

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    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35098
    Zara West
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    Thank you, Carla, for the fast feedback. Much appreciated. Zara

    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35090
    Zara West
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    Here is Chapter 18 of Hooked. Getting to the end.  All comments appreciated.Zara

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    in reply to: Carla Ward submissions #35088
    Zara West
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    Hi Carla, Here are some thoughts for chapter 4.  Zara

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    in reply to: Jenn Fox Submissions #35084
    Zara West
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    So sorry, Jenn. Here is the correct copy and the rtf. My only excuse is being in a time crunch. Zara

     

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    in reply to: Carla Ward submissions #35051
    Zara West
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    Hi Carla,

     

    Here is some feedback on Ch 3. Not much. Reads well.  Zara

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    in reply to: Jenn Fox Submissions #35049
    Zara West
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    Jenn, here are 70-74 too.

    Zara

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    in reply to: Jenn Fox Submissions #35046
    Zara West
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    Here are some suggestions, Jenn. Use what is useful. Love how the story is going. Zara

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    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #35044
    Zara West
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    Thank you Ana and Jenn for the feedback on Chapter 17. I am buried right now in another drafting another book so forgive my delay in responding. Your prompt crits are always deeply appreciated. Zara

    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #34624
    Zara West
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    Oops. Sorry about that. Not sure how I did that. Anyway for those who don’t want to wade, here is Ch 17 all by itself.

    in reply to: Zara West Submissions #34620
    Zara West
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    Hi everyone,

     

    Here is my next chapter. This is the REAL Ch 17. The chapter I submitted last week was actually Chapter 16. All comments welcome. Zara

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    in reply to: Lisa Coughlin Chapter 4 #34618
    Zara West
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    Hi Lisa,

     

    So sorry I am behind. Here is Chapter 2 with my comment. Hope they are helpful. Zara

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